Nobody cared, then they did. Why?
- Chuck Klosterman
70 years, few tears, hairy ears.
- Bill Querengesser
"For Sale: baby shoes, never worn"
-Ernest Hemingway
recently people have been putting pictures to their 6 word memoir and they have been incredible. here are some on this NPR LINK.
so i think it would be great if each one of us did one about ourself. perhaps post a photoshopped picture and 6 words, or just your 6 word memoir all on its own. either way, i think it would be so interesting to see each others lives in a simple 6 words.
HERE IS MINE:
..............LEFT BEHIND A LEFT BEHIND CHILD....................
alternates for mine:
always looking, never finding. feeling found.
lonely child found fame, lost self.
-stephen
so SO many good ones in the comments, everyone should read them all!
but few (there were tons) that really hit me personally are:
...everything changes; everything stays the same
...missing piece to a bigger picture
..."There is always hope. Rinse, Repeat"
...Looked before she leaped, missed.
....8,264 days, 22 hours, 47 min.
....Finding the sublime in the simple
...Starving artist with no artistic talent
...life solves all but one question
...finding my song--waiting to sing
...clay molded by too many hands.
...six words short of a memoir.
197 comments:
recognized,repented,and found eternal joy
awakened hope, then lost. still searching.
wanderer's life lost in world's words.
life's reqiuem: adagio --> dissonance --> perfect harmony
dreams on hold; maybe next year.
imperfect but feeling lucky and blessed
This is awesome. I enjoyed yours & your childhood picture is adorable. :)
I will be thinking of mine. I want to put more thought in to it.
somehow remains faithful despite bothersome doubts
still waiting for it to start.
alternative:
wishing for peter pan to come.
I guess for me.....
Slowly waking with a breathing heart.
or simply
Follower plus Punk equals Following Punk.
looking, finding, loosing... repeat it again.
innocence stolen, lost, seeming not being
caught between the past and present
or
everything changes; everything stays the same
you're too cute! ;)
I'm thinking...will comment back.
missing piece to a bigger picture
looking towards a better, brighter day
Lost in self. Found in Christ.
"blessed beyond belief. struggling against myself."
...that's really hard to think about, but that's what i've come up with in 2 minutes.
Left the rat race, loving life.
searched was found, was left lost.
There must be more than this.
"There is always hope. Rinse, Repeat"
beautifully broken but still holding on.
Dreams are vivid, are they real?
searching for what i already found.
or
broken and misunderstood.lost, yet found.
** i would've posted photos but html cannot be accepted, so i don't know how to...
but your photo's adorable ! is that david cassidy on the guitar?!
if you really read these you notice a pattern in the different tones of nostalgia and longing for something better.
--It's Not About Making Me Happy.
Looked before she leaped, missed it.
shattered dreams and fractured reality - existing.
Die to self, hope in Christ.
alright, here are a few:
figuring out whats not figured out.
decide to find more than yourself.
breathe in, breathe out. it helps.
breathe, be calm, love; thats life.
Broken wings, still sing, defying everything.
six word memoir..
what was lost, has been restored.
An open book. Take a look.
money never solved the problem...act
Wondered.Thought.Broken.Prayed.Trusted.Saved
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whispered prayer, soul bared, heart repaired...
what you find someone left behind
or
Why press on when hard pressed
Is that Shaun Cassidy on your guitar? haha.
Anyways,
Wishful singing often paints obscure pictures.
forgive me, please never forget me.
or maybe....
looking forward to your latest posts =D
Dismantled. Reassembled. Each time someone stronger.
Or
Searching. Looking for something. What? Unsure.
stephen, if finding fame has caused you to lose yourself, why continue to do what you do? just wondering :)
mel
I really like this assignment. I want to put some thought into mine. I have a few iedas.
My initial thought was:
"Indescribable with a mere six words"
but I figured there has to be some more creativity in me somewhere. :)
"Once upon a time, I was."
And the NPR link is broken. There's a after it.
Stephen, I worry about you. I am sorry that you feel left behind, and I wish I could help you. Please know that even though I do not know you, I care.
anyways... here's mine.
All I know is music. Love?
alternate:
so happy, except for one thing.
selfish, unloving, broken, until baby shiloh.
Life is short, seize the moment.
I have the best picture, but don't know how to post it. =(
I like it! Great Idea, Steven!
Lose yourself to Find Others
I thought about this for a good 20 minutes, but I still haven't come up with one that fits perfectly.
but I did come up with a couple I like.
1. searching, but unsure where to look
2. never truly lived, let's change that
and I second what 'doubtisfaith' said in every way :)
innocent at birth. guilty by death.
bumpy road, kissed toad, recovery mode!
this is a really great idea.. you may want to consider participating in another program that NPR does... i did it for an English assignment, and it was actually very interesting to think about. you basically write a short essay on your most important belief of your life. search for I Believe on NPR.org
A sinner persecuted but forgiven, loved.
It was great to catch up the other day.
Peace,
Daniel+
puddles of forgotten memories make lakes.
or the ever cliche
sleeps to dream, dreams to live.
i'm always searching for the truth
or
tried to be selfless and failed
hang in there stephen, you're not alone.
persecuted, still standing,searching for truth
Simple convictions are far from me.
Here's mine, telling the whole truth.
-- Hopeless dreamer whose dreams came true.
We did this in one of my writing classes a few weeks ago, mine is:
22 years old, 12 at heart.
-Crystal
a profound mind, searching for time
learned: always look before you leap.
God chases me , i run away.
and/or
God catches me, happy He did.
my flame flickers but never fails
Holding on to nothing but hope.
Learning and doubting; imperfect but loved.
8,264 days, 22 hours, 47 min.
Twilight ideals, hating that I'm awake.
lost and found. awake and learning.
Finding the sublime in the simple
Pain ruins what you let it.
"Dismantle. Repair." j/k someone much wiser than myself wrote that (although I wish I had!)
"Pasionately loved lover yet single."
I have a 5hr drive to make tonight so if I think of anything better I'll let you know!
Oops, I can't count. Sorry.
"A single unwanted pasionately loved lover."
There we go :)
Wow this is a really beautiful idea... thanks for initiating such a creative outlet!
"Life of convenience... well, not theirs.."
finally found beauty in everything, satisfied
abandoned
adopted
aware
accepted
acknowledged
audacious
selfish
single
love
lost
faith
renewed
stephen, i'm lovin' the pic... lmao - shawn cassidy... hahahaha!!!
once that was routine now joy
or
one that was lost now found
or
Lord, please come and resurrect me.
so i think this is a really great idea, and i've been telling all my friends to write their own. interesting to read, and challenging to write. as of right now this is mine:
writing the words no one hears
will probably think of alternate ones. :-D
surrounded by beauty, consumed by passion
yeah there's another. :)
Learned the most from the unexpected.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v117/laurewyn/sixwords.jpg
"Lost on path; blazing my own"
"Unsatisfied appetite; Hungry for True Love"
oh, i thought a few alternate for mine :)
- Always happy but never really satisfied.
- Looking up, unaware of holes ahead.
- Lost in a world she created.
:)
Okay, mine is going to sound dumb compared to everyone else's; I mean, it's hard to put together six words as your entire memoir. In fact, the first word that came out of me after I read this blog was "bla." :( So here goes my six-word memoir:
La Bla Ha Cha Spa Hurrah!
"La" because I'm a musician, "Bla" because I'm weird, "Ha" because I'm silly, "Cha" because I'm like a spicy pepper with a temper, "Spa" because I'm girly, and "Hurrah!" because I know Jesus.
Or, on a more serious note:
"Jesus and a Guitar. That's All."
Molded in my dad's image.
Nature.
Fated in my mom's upbringing.
Nurture.
and
Half my life in a blackout.
^I journalled that when I was 10 and a classmate was complaining he never got to see enough of his father because he was divorced from his mom..I only wished I had even met mine.
My life's dance; a melancholy romance.
Lost ideals, Aware moments, Found living.
I think we all agree that Stephen was such a cutie when he was a little kid!
Soft Skeleton. Dismantled. Repaired. Peace. Pain.
I rethought mine in the shower today lol.
I came up with a "series of 6 word memoirs" let's say :)
I see beauty in the darkness
I hear beauty in the silence
Feel the beauty when I'm numb
Smell the beauty of the rain
Taste the beauty of the ordinary
The beauty I know is love
When all else fails, just laugh.
wow. this idea is amazing. i just read through other peoples comments and was amazed. i wish i was able to come up with something as clever. this is what i came up with....
know life. know struggles. still fighting.
six words short of a memoir.
Insatiable dreamer discontent with contentment. Alas.
Lost little girl on busy street-corner
Lost, befriended, betrayed then lost again
Struggled, found Him, recovered, found peace
loved, multiplied, forsaken, alone, feel uunforgiven
Raise me, oh my living God.
Okay, so I finally thought of mine. Well, I came up with a few:
1. Wanting more yet afraid of change.
3. Her life has brought me happiness.
3. Music. Music. Music. Music. Music. Me.
4. Struggling to better myself. Almost there.
5. Fourteen years lost, then meeting him.
6. Loneliness sucks. Could use a hug.
But the one that describes me the most:
Found life in his blue eyes.
seeking the stability of broken glass.
im torn between
...soul born, soul lost, soul freed...
and
...observes through others, lives for Him...
lost...loved...waiting...
Realized own futility. Then smiled.
I Came, Saw, Got Blowed Up
alone in crowds, scared and smiling.
I can't think of any good ones, but I'll go with these:
'Someday I'll Be Saturday Night. Maybe.'
'Imperfect perfectionist. Hopeful pessimist. Rarely kissed.'
'I'm cold. Put the heating on.'
http://www.shariblackvelvet.com/photography/howaboutieatyou.jpg
I'm walking backwards up the stairs
waiting for the world to act.
stolen from despair, returned to Owner
Silence is what King Midas creates.
or
First baby breath, killed Lady Macbeth
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/
breathofprose/sixwords.jpg
time is short, live it up!
artfully created, created art, reflecting creator.
Dismantle, Repair, Repeat. Control, Alt, Delete.
Another failure. Man, can't I think up something that's not funny???
Here's another alternative: Stephen is much smarter than me.
"Non-religious: faithless yet hopeful, musical devotion."
or maybe...
"Lost God; Found salvation [or hope/faith] in music."
Insert any similar word in place of "salvation" and you can use it that way. It's the only steady thing in my life and I am completely devoted to it.
The "Non-" is probably cheating a bit though eh?
Just wanted to add this bit since I am tired from the show tonight (which was amazing as always) and forgot to say it...
I chose to use the word "salvation" because music saves my life every day and without it, I would be lost.
Stephen, tonight's show really lifted my spirits. Thank you for that. :)
deserved to be forgotten. never was.
or
called out of darkness. returned, rescued.
or
clay molded by too many hands.
chosen. turn and set your journey.
Music is my only requited lover.
living in the scene but unseen
hopelessly in love with hopeless love.
running from neverland, seeing the truth.
A passenger, my car, road of life.
Naturally it all comes together sometimes.
Traveling, resting, going home, repeating; life.
Lost in confusion of my own language.
Not ready to understand, only be.
(That's all I have for now).
lookin forward, never back. always searching
Can't do this alone. Need you.
this took a lot of thought, but i finally came up with a couple...
didnt know what to look for
or
never could see, something was missing
today is my first ever birthday
alternative
leaving yesterday becoming who I am
not to please anyone but God
forgetting used attachment, taking new risk
weaknesses and strengths, I am yours
realize I am weak, needing help
disconnected; trying to find Him again.
never grew out of growing up.
my place: between waking and sleeping
Something breaking slowly on the mend.
You inspire me.
finding my song--waiting to sing.
Here's another one:
Starving artist with no artistic talent
i thought of another one.
"we all need a reason to believe."
life solves all but one question
why is never itself a question
tears shed leaves a stained scar
Six Words To Remember Me By.
constantly in awe of the world
young, full of life, and ready
here is another attempt.
Lost sheep, found the way home
looking for happiness. fear of failure.
Her Sorrow is an Eternal Silence.
A lot to say, no time.
Cynicism turned inward, always fearing self.
stumbling, searching, wandering, clueless; still hopeful
Wishing to be found, always lost.
Hopeless to self, hopeful for others.
Pondering the impossible. Living the remarkable.
I want more than this, now.
open arms. open heart. my demise
he will be my one regret.
I know I'm way late on this, but...
Not all who search are lost.
Or.
Desmond Hume will be my constant :)
Rarely noticed, yet there, watching, envious.
Hope, killed, one time too many.
Unwanted, thrown away, replaced by emptyness.
Pictures fill the space of time.
Wandering circles, yet never the same.
Dreams were lost, returning once again.
At least I'm surviving... I think?
---
You were SO cute when you were little! :D Your memoir's awesome.
Thought of a few more.
Always searching... there's nothing but dust.
Dusty footprints. Am alone, yet wasn't.
You'll come if needed? ..prove it.
I JUST KNOW JESUS IS THE WAY!
Teenage cliche searching for something original.
Find myself, live for someone else...
or...
Waiting for praise, Lonely most days
im thinking about a couple others...
The best friend you never knew.
Billy Jean is not my lover...
been struck down, but, not destoyed.
Little girl lost, young adult found.
I can only be who I am.
God is dead: I am free
from the new fray song, but i think these six words are very powerful, at least to my life:
"Lost and insecure, you found me"
Always searching, brought back to one
joint decision. single blamed. permanent damage?
Sometimes sleep to escape broken reality
Losing hope. Living through other's triumphs.
I fall down. Heart still beating.
My life is an acquired taste.
Falling down, rising up. Again, again.
killing clouds with my air rifle
i suppose i often like to use clouds as a metaphor for dreams and aspirations...
leaped first, fell flat, got up
or
never looked, leaped carelessly, fell flat
or
running towards nothing in wrong direction
or
dancing, screaming, singing; nothing to celebrate
or
jumping for joy that never existed
or
too old to act my age
i could go on for hours, this is so fun!
dreams so big they become walls
lover turned pretender with good intentions
awkward self tries fitting into conformity
or
back then we were only children.
Not just another life without reason.
Was Weak. Found Faith. Grew Strong.
--Angie
happiness is a choice. choose wisely.
trying to find her mr. darcy
It doesn't matter until it does.
Fast forward through life. Rewind. Remember.
or
A painful past, a better understanding.
Just wanted to save the world.
always searching for that special something
Finding love, finding life in Him.
Or
Clay Pot; God's strength in Weakness
Eternally going up the down escalator.
Nicest anarchist with (a) streak for consistency.
Always pretending, she never met herself.
broken by people. healed by God.
Restraining fear, nothing more found here
or...
Self-loathing is quaint, never knowing restraint
or....
My polished stone will be better
or...
Chop onions if you can't cry
I could go on forever
I know it's been a while since this was posted, but the other day we were assigned to write one of these in relation to our AP english class (our experience, advice or warnings to upcoming students, etc). Here's what I came up with:
Remain resolute - City on a Hill.
Even though it was written specifically for the class, I think that it applies to so much more, and I try to follow this advice every day.
If you've never read it before, look up John Winthrop's "A City upon a Hill" speech, as that's what this is based around. That speech was (I think!) based off of Matthew 5:14, so it can also be read in relation to that as well :)
I'm so very late on commenting this, but it intrigued me.
This came to me in a dream, a man was singing it. I don't think he actually exists, but it stuck with me.
"Break the nights; unbreak my soul."
"Change the World, at least Someones"
hearts held together with sticky tape
Robbed; realized things doesn’t equal happiness
I ran, God followed. Passionate pursuit.
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